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[Baby boy]

A change for once.

You are right about the testosterone thing. Males have testosterone and yes, we do implant it into out steering wheels when we drive out cars.
It was different and that's why I gave it more marks than usual but all in all wasn't the bestest thing I have seen. But thankyou for sharing it nonetheless.
Cheers.

[TeddyBear]

Wonderful effort.

With improvement on the animation and sound side, you'll just keep going up... like a balloon with helium in it that got caught on a kid's zipper which was then partially deflated when the kid sucked some helium out but it's ok because he refilled it with the air in his lungs which by the way had a small percentage of helium in it. The balloon left the Earth and popped a few minutes later, but by that time, the analogy escaped it's attachment with you so everything is now fine.

[A pointless event.]

Not all that bad.

If you're going to make more of these, make sure you improve the animation and the script as the number one priority (Jeez, it's so easy to critise but when you have to do it yourself it's that much harder). The narrative should be a little more fast paced to keep the audience attentive. There should be more jokes, if that's what you're after, and that's what I think you should do. There is definate potential in this idea.
Best of luck!

[Jabby McFuck #14]

You mean there's 13 more of these?

The comedy lasted about 5 seconds in this, because we just don't understand what their saying! It could have been good! The background looked great. At least the guy with the knife (Jabby, I assume) didn't do what I thought he would do with it.

[Bad Loser 1]

Not a bad effort!

This was enjoyable.
Short, sweet, entertaining.
Not really my type of thing (stick death and blatant violence) but for what it was, it was alright.
Perhaps a little more work on the animation.
Well done.

[Sprankton. A noun.]

This is better than dreams.

Marc, this stuff is gold. It is my favourite of yours. I just wish you spelt your name with a k. Why not a k? Oh wait I get it, you chuck in an M from your surname and expect people not to notice that you spell Marc with a c? See- this is why humanity is doomed.

[Don't Pick Your Nose]

Oh, Alan.

I was one of the ones who did not pick up on the satirical nature of this animation (unless you are joking about it being a satire, in which case, I didn't pick up on that either). But how can you blame me? Where in it was there anything that gave the viewer the impression it was satirical? Maybe it's just me. To all of you out there, watch the rest of Alanthebox's stuff! We are talking quality shite.

[TV Good, Book Bad 2]

A funny bunch of sketches.

This was definately fun to watch. The title is perfect. I take it you guys are avid Family Guy fans, as everybody should be. I say this because of the 'ha ha' Speed Racer gag, and the Jesus tasting like alcohol type gag in your animation. I reckon they are quite similar. A good job nonetheless.

[Whiny Superstars vol. 1]

I think that's a fair mark to give.

It was worth watching, don't get me wrong, but it still needed more. At this stage, I'm not that keen on watching the next 2 volumes. More anger! More drama! It will become funnier then. A fantastic first effort, though. The drawings were sound. More movement with them, perhaps. Well done.

Johnny responds:

Thx for the input! Now that I'm getting the hang of it (and it's not rushed...long story) I want DRAMA!! lol. I'm a sucker for people getting mutilated.

[Marshmallow and the BBQ]

I wanted to laugh but it didn't let me.

Although I find this whole Clock/Lock culture thing intriguing and mysterious (I still don't know what it is or how it started), I don't think an animation like this does it any justice. As a lock (or clock) you represent that body of artists who are locks and clocks. Watching this made me a little more disenchanted with locks and clocks as a whole. There was barely even a joke in it. The joke regarding the boxer shorts on a rope was unclear. Sorry buddy.

sandman0277 responds:

It's alright. At least you gave a valid point why you didn't like the cartoon instead of saying "OMG you teh sux! Piconjo pwns j00 f00! cox r cool". I can understand how this doesn't measure up to the cream of the crop like "Lock Hawk Down" and "The Locks Are Bored 1 & 2". To understand the joke you'd probably have to be a Lock. When Puppy says, "We're Going To Be Late For The Barbeque" Marshmallow says "WHAT!? You're going to kill Boxer?!?"
I decided to show Puppy killing Boxer as a random thing to make Locks smile. I'm sorry I let you down. Maybe my other works will get you liking the Locks a bit more. Thanks for you're comment!